Hi Grace, You shared some really special memories and I got the feeling of how special the people were in those memories - most of them were things you did with other people and that is so special. Your descriptive words gave me a picture in my mind and tastes in my mouth (like the word tangy). Keep using those senses in your writing and I look forward to hearing more of your memories, stories and ideas.
Wow lots of special memories! You used lots of descriptive words which painted an amazing picture as I read through your writing. Some of your memories remind me of mine. My family and I enjoy strawberry picking too!
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Hi Grace,
ReplyDeleteYou shared some really special memories and I got the feeling of how special the people were in those memories - most of them were things you did with other people and that is so special. Your descriptive words gave me a picture in my mind and tastes in my mouth (like the word tangy). Keep using those senses in your writing and I look forward to hearing more of your memories, stories and ideas.
Wow lots of special memories! You used lots of descriptive words which painted an amazing picture as I read through your writing. Some of your memories remind me of mine. My family and I enjoy strawberry picking too!
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