this week for writing we are learning to make paragraphs. The theme for writing was action shots.
My heart was pounding. Out of the corner of my eye, I see a glance of the defender ready to pounce and get the rebound. Oh`! no I don't know what ti do.I hear my team mates screaming , "pass it back!". I go to pass it back but the defender pounces and does a great indecept. The other team passes the netball like a yoyo. The other team's goal shoot is already in the circle. They already got the goal.Game over i wish i was better.
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