This week our topic was pahurehure inlet. I enjoyed doing the create cause we could get very creative with the bird feeder. I struggled on the letter writing task cause i think i made it sound like a explanation. So next time i do a letter i will try and make it sound better.
What would you do to help the Pahurehure inlet to make it better?
Wow Grace, the bird feeder you made with Ella is absolutely beautiful. Will you put it up on the trees by Kahikatea Hub?
ReplyDeleteYou've done a really great job in your writing. For your explanation, I like that you gave an introduction and talked about your topic-pollution. You've explained what your crew will do and how will benefit the community.
For your persuasive writing, you've showed great structure by separating each new argument with numbered points. To make an impact when you are persuading, you can try to use words that stir up emotions. e.g. It will stop pollution from destroying our waterways/ It can prevent helpless ducks from getting run over.
You are becoming an amazing writer, Grace! Keep going!
Hello Grace good job on you're work. Congrats on you're certificate!
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