This week it was the same topic as last week but part 2. this weeks challenge was make a hut. it was really fun but we did not have a enough hot glue sticks to finish.
Thanks for sharing your learning, Grace. I know that it is so annoying when you start an amazing project and then you run out of something (like glue sticks!) Is there anything you can use instead. You were really thoughtful in the way you structured your writing. You used headings and paragraphs. Keep up the great work.
Hi Grace, great to see that you had a go at drawing 3D shapes. How did you find it? I agree with Mr Cossey, you have shown really great structure in your persuasive writing. I like that you used rhetorical questions in the introduction to make the Prime Minister really think about the benefits of having a playground. I also like that you summarized your main points and used 'I strongly believe...' to conclude. Tino pai!
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Thanks for sharing your learning, Grace. I know that it is so annoying when you start an amazing project and then you run out of something (like glue sticks!) Is there anything you can use instead. You were really thoughtful in the way you structured your writing. You used headings and paragraphs. Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteHi Grace, great to see that you had a go at drawing 3D shapes. How did you find it? I agree with Mr Cossey, you have shown really great structure in your persuasive writing. I like that you used rhetorical questions in the introduction to make the Prime Minister really think about the benefits of having a playground. I also like that you summarized your main points and used 'I strongly believe...' to conclude. Tino pai!
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