Hi Grace, you've shown a good understanding of fractions on slide 9-15. Lots of equations on slide 8 too, well done.
Your placar is very interesting! I like that you've used a rhetorical question to engage the audience in your ad. I also like that you used listing - 'trips, vacations and many more' to show the uses of your new transport.
Hi Grace, Yes, it can be very frustrating when you are trying to make something and Minecraft is not working.
It's great that you enjoyed making a brand new vehicle. Making vehicles that have more than one use could be a good way to save on materials and costs.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Grace, you've shown a good understanding of fractions on slide 9-15. Lots of equations on slide 8 too, well done.
ReplyDeleteYour placar is very interesting! I like that you've used a rhetorical question to engage the audience in your ad. I also like that you used listing - 'trips, vacations and many more' to show the uses of your new transport.
Hi Grace,
ReplyDeleteYes, it can be very frustrating when you are trying to make something and Minecraft is not working.
It's great that you enjoyed making a brand new vehicle. Making vehicles that have more than one use could be a good way to save on materials and costs.