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Thursday, September 9, 2021

Mr Chicken

 This week for writing we had to write a narrative story.we had to use first person or third person in our story. I really enjoyed that we could get really creative.


SPLAT went the oil as ti dropped onto Mr Chickens head.He really should not be there but i dont think anyone knows. Mr Chicken has a secret lab underneath the kitchen in KFC in Takanini, the new one that everyone likes going to.


Mr Chicken wasn't always bad, he used to be good.  He lived in the chicken coop in the garden but then one day his best friend Charlie the Chicken got eaten so then he decided that things needed to change.


He was sick of hiding so  he didn't get caught and taken away to be eaten.  He watched as the all chickens got eaten 1 by 1. After that day he knew that this would not be the way he was going to die.


Mr Chicken was chubby, had big fluffy orange feathers and wore very small glasses that could barely fit his face.  He had super powers,he could fly so fast but thats not all, he could make lots of potions. Not just normal positions but green poisonous potions that he plans to poison the chicken at KFC.


He could hear the chickens being sizzled. He felt so bad that and he knew that he had to stop them. Mr Chicken quickly made a potion like there was no tomorrow.  As he was finishing off more and more chickens were being cooked. Thats when he flew as fast as he could to the secret opening.  He sucked in stomach and all of his big fluffy feathers. Mr Chicken could finally fit  threw  the hole.  He sees the man wearing the chef uniform and starts to attacks, feathers were flying everywhere and Mr Chicken managed to squirt the potion into the oil and it turned lime green in seconds.  They were onto him.  Mr Chicken quickly flew outside and all of the frozen chicken came to life and began to make their escape.  


Unfortunately Mr Chicken lost a few feathers and got caught by animal control but they didn't stop him from defeating the chicken eaters.  All of the KFC chicken was poisoned and chicken could no longer be eaten. 


It was cold and sad in chicken prison and Mr Chicken was miserable waiting to get out.  Years passed by then one day he was finally let free.

He became very rich by selling the green potion and one day he was so rich that he could open many restaurants  called KFD.  Kentucky fried DUCK!

                                                 The end


1 comment:

  1. Hi Grace! I really enjoyed your story, especially the ending! It made me giggle. I've left some feedback on your writing doc, you can have a look there.

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