This week for writing we had to write if we should open the borders or not. I enjoyed this because i liked doing the intro because it was fun collecting information.
Since 2019 Covid has been Affecting New zealanders in a very harmful way. Covid is a virus that we can beat if we all work together and stop spreading the virus. By closing the borders people from other countries cant get in and we will be more safe.
Firstly,Closing the border will keep us safe from other countries. For example most Covid cases have started by people traveling all over the world then coming back and not realising you have covid. Another example New zealand is a beautiful country and most people love coming here but it does mean a bigger risk of us having to be in Lockdown.
Secondly,Closing the border will help to protect the people in our country and reduce the amount of people that may die from covid 19. If we kept the border open many people will get the virus and then they could become very sick and die like in other countries such as America and Italy. We are a small country and we dont want to loose anybody to this virus so keeping the borders will help to stop the spread and keep our people safe.
In conclusion we should not open the borders,it will reduce the covid cases and keep us safe.But not opening the border does mean people cant see family members that are in other countries. I strongly believe we should keep the border closed.
Wow Grace, you are becoming an amazing writer! I can see that you have put lots of effort into doing your research and rewriting them into your own words. Ka pai!
ReplyDeleteWell done on adding lots of details and examples to your paragraphs. You have also used different sentence starters to keep your writing interesting.
In your conclusion, you mentioned that people can't see their family members. You could give a recommendation here on how people can solve this problem? Perhaps zoom calls or letters?