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Friday, September 24, 2021

The day i woke up with Super powers

 This week for writing we had to write a narrative about the day we woke up with super powers.I enjoyed making up the name of the villain/bully it was fun.


 I raced down the driveway to meet my friend at the bus stop.  My heart was pounding as i hadnt run that fast for a long time as we have been in lockdown.  


Everyone was wearing masks and i could barely tell who was who as the masks kind of disguise them.  Everybody stared as i jumped on the bus without a mask.  I had the left the house too quick and forgotten mine.  Luckily the driver handed me one and i quickly put it on.  

Five minutes later we arrived at school.


Today was a big a day for me as we would be getting our test results back from our history test last week.  

I was a llttle nervous but was more excited to think about me getting a higher score than the classroom bully.  He was so annoying, Jackson Jigglesin had big ears like a monkey and a long nose like a witch filled with boogas.  He had freckles all over his face and had red hair that turned orange in the sun. 

He wasn't always a bully but then one day his older brother bit him on the bum in front of everyone and thats the moment he changed.  Every time we did a test he would cheat and then brag about how great he was and the high score he got.  The teachers thought he was great but the students disagreed.  He was known by some as a the carrot boy with boogas in his nose, others said he looked like a tomato when he got angry. I just did int trust him.


Ring,ring,ring.The bell rings louder than normal. I rushed to class. I see the teacher handing out the results one by one. As i get my results Jackson juggilson screams from the top of his lungs, “I got 99%! I bet none of you got a better score than me!” I read my results. My heart was pounding. I got a 98% 1% less than Jackson jiggilson i was so disappointed in my self. Jackson jiggilson comes to see what percent i got. He starts to burst with laughter. 10 minutes later hes still laughing i was so mad. My had scrunched up into fists but decided not to throw a punch.


It was the next day of school,Jackson jiggilson went around bragging and bragging like he was a celebrity.But officiously he wasn't cause no one would ever want to look at someone that has boogers overflowing out of his nose forming piles on the floor. RING,RING,RING the bell goes as i walk to class I see Jackson jiggilson waiting for someone outside the class room.As i walk to go inside Jackson jiggilson launches a book at my feet. I tumble onto the floor,Jackson jiggilson was laughing and laughing.Until i swooshed my finger threw the air going in circles. Jackson jiggilson was zooming in the classroom like a superhero. Then i flick my finger and zoom Jackson jiggilson is flying straight out the window. The class was laughing at Jackson jiggilson. I was so surprised and VERY happy at the same time.I wonder what other powers i have.

                                                 To be continued…..


1 comment:

  1. Amazing work Grace! Your stories are original and funny, I really enjoy reading them. I've left some feedback for you on your doc so you can have a look there:)

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