This week for writing the topic was Our human body.I decided to write about the human eye.I enjoyed learning more about eyes because i never knew that i blink so much in a day.
The Human Eye
Which part of your body lets you read a menu, glaze at a rainbow, and see a football heading your way? Which part lets you cry when your sad and form tears?Which part has muscles that adjust to let you focus on things that are really close and far away.If you guessed Eye your correct! Your Eye works from the moment you wake up. Without your eye you would not be able to see anything. Come join me and find out more!
What does the human Eye do? The human eyes role is too convert light into electrical signals called nerve impulses that the brain converts into images around us.The human eye has quite a big roll in our body so we have to take good care of it but you can get a fake eye but it wont do the same. From the second we wake up from sleeping our eye starts to work.
Why we need it? Without the human eye we would not be able to see. If we cant see we would not know whats happening and be very confused. We need a eye so we can glaze our eyes at pictures,storys,stars and food. It is a privilege to have eyes because not all people our born with eye sight.
we need our eyes to see,read a menu and glaze at the sun.our eyes are very important on our body and need to be looked after they are very delicate. Fun fact about Eyes.
1.The human eye blinks an average of 4,200,000 times a year.
2.Your eyes are about 1 inch across and weigh about 0.25 ounce.
3.The human eye can differentiate approximately 10 million different colours.
Hi Grace, you've used very good structure here by including an introduction, main paragraphs and a conclusion. I was very impressed by how you applied our new learning about rhetorical questions and inviting the reader in your introduction.
ReplyDeleteYou've done a good job of using topic sentences at the beginning of your paragraphs. I can see that you've done some research on your topic and this adds detail to your explanations.
For your conclusion, well done for summarizing the jobs of an eye. Instead of listing fun facts, you can just use 1 fun fact to wrap it up. For example:
Our human eye works hard for us every day. In fact, it blinks an average of 4,200,000 times a year. Next time you blink, remember to appreciate all that it does for you.